Revison

As a more of a creative writer the whole "feedback" idea is big to me. After doing something you dont really really know if it's really that good until you get feedback from others, and no I'm not talkin feedback from your parents because they think everything you do is good, I'm talkin feedback from someone that will be blunt and slightly harsh on what your "Performace" really is. After you get that much needed non mommy review the revison is the take over in fixing the things that are wrong like, voice, grammer, spelling, and just all of the content in general. Without revison we would do nothing but turn in raft drafts in life :)

NEw Essay

Well, im not gonna lie to you all but this one is a staight struggle. I feel that we are re writing the essay that we just wrote but with another source? I donno I am jus confused and come to a concrete conclusion with where I wanna go with it. I have started but its nothing to look at, I am going to anaylize my own essay with refering back to the west article as well as going back to the Seattle Foodster to compare styles.